Unfinished Chapters of her.

He: Please don’t leave me , we can work out things in the upcoming days
    for sure.I love you from all my heart and soul.
She: No i don’t think we can stay together any further and please
    never try to contact me just to know if you have any place
    in my life ever again ,i have my new bf who cares and loves me a lot. Good bye she said

** paved and turned toward the door to leave **

He: I knew you were about say this and take this last letter and
    i know you don’t feel like reading just give it a look once he
    said and left.

  The letter

the boy once loved your girl,
i thought her heart (but not now)

 Yes dear,this letter isn’t for you coz this for your boyfriend. Yes as you said  i know he knows you better than anyone in this world
just thought i would tell few things about you from my side.Coming to you boy you are lucky enough to get one of the most
treasured girl in the world.She loves to start her day with coffee in her bed side served hot with almond cookies and forehead kiss and most importantly you will take hours to convince her to wake up. By now you might have figured out how much of a sanity freak she might be, make sure you never mess up with her while trying to wake up her or else you might have face the early morning trauma’s of hers. More over she is very much foodie and her day doesn’t start with good breakfast if you end up having an ugly fight last night make sure you serve her with scrambled eggs & Breads with black coffee (two spoons of sugar)& just settle things with her.Whenever she doesn’t speak up with you for more than five minutes ,it’s confirmed that something is troubling her make sure you ask her out she won’t tell you at start but will when you convince her.She loves to go out in the rain ,long rides in the mid night ,sleeping all day cuddling in the bed with out doing anything,loves pasta served with white wine , she would lay in the bed and play with your hair and chest when she has very bad day out make sure you would take her out and buy her some good ice creams ,she will forget to get her car key’s make sure you follow her  to door and give it to her,she is very much scared of the oils take care that you won’t allow her any where near her,she is scared of darkness always keep pair of candle to just avoid her from getting panicked.Never wear pink shirt or t-shirt in front of her she hates to see her man in pink.Try hard not to get her drunk too much during her happy times or else make sure you give her hungover pill and lime juice with mint in it[you can find the list of the tablet in the first compartment of her study table exactly below where she keeps her novels]coz she might have variations in her body temperature if she doesn’t take pill in the morning after she get drunk.Make sure you remember every anniversary as possible to surprise her and see that happiness in her eyes and the child hidden in her very strong composed stern yet sweet voice.And i end this here not because i finished listing coz there are few that goes on until we stop it ,this is one of those things and i know it’s hard to let go something when that is the only thing you have chased all your life and knowing it can never be yours can break you but as said life goes on.

I don’t need to take you to guilt trip to you get you back nor i will beg you to be back all i wish is you to be happy with whatever the decisions you make,I’ll get married to someone whom my parent chooses not coz i stopped loving you or i am over you it’s because when you cant be happy with your decisions at-least make others happy with theirs.
9years ago “Destiny gave you to me and said you were my first love and now i give you back to that destiny telling you are my last “.

Mr Lucky
In her heart ( which i wasn’t able to make my spot)



  1. Poet Rummager · March 29, 2016

    That was cute! The animation is funny with the other guy quite irritated. Lol. Very sweet 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

  2. Manan Unleashed · March 29, 2016

    Oh my God!! Who is that unfortunate girl who leaves someone who writes a letter like this!! Loved it loved it loved it

    Liked by 2 people

    • voiceofastranger · March 29, 2016

      well that unfortunate girl is imaginary as of my life..but there are few out their who are settling for stone instead of a diamond.. Glad you loved it..:)


  3. Aphrodite · March 29, 2016

    Such an innovative way to express. Brilliant. 🙂


  4. kratzworld · April 2, 2016

    It’s so heart touching…. well writing letters already brings in so much nostalgia… even i’ve written letters for someone in real life… 🙂 this piece of yours is beautifully written.. 👍

    Liked by 1 person

  5. Chandni Asnani · April 16, 2016

    Omg!! 😦 😦
    This is heartbreaking! 😥
    I wish the girl would’ve realised that he is the perfect guy! 😦
    I have no words, this is the best letter I’ve ever read, very very veryyy painful! Was the guy you? :O

    Liked by 1 person

    • voiceofastranger · May 4, 2016

      thank you so very much chandni..:) Best letter this words means a lot to me coz i’m just trying to find a new way of expressing the same things..No sadly i wasn’t the one ..:) and Big sorry for the late revert was just pre-occupied with few personal stuffs..:)

      Liked by 1 person

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