Zindagi..:)

I’m no pro at writing poem in hindi just giving it a try as Chandni Asnani suggested me to  .Hope you like it  Chandni ..:)

 

Zindagi guzar jati hai
kiske pyaar pane mai aur
woh maula urf tak nahi
karti us pyaar ko
chin ne mai

Naa ujaad khuda kiske
sache pyaar ko
barso lag jagta
hai bas pyaar
ko dund ne mai

Advertisements

24 comments

  1. kratzworld · April 14, 2016

    Loved it..:) you should write more in hindi. 😊 it’s a great start

    Liked by 1 person

  2. bhaatdal · April 14, 2016

    Good try.. Great start

    Liked by 1 person

  3. Antra · April 14, 2016

    Thoughts beautifully conveyed…..well done 👍 :))

    Liked by 1 person

  4. Chandni Asnani · April 14, 2016

    Aww!! Thankyou, I knew aap zarur likhoge! This is lovely!! ❤❤
    Hehe, abi pata chal gaya aap toh bade talented ho! Aur likhho na, bohot achha likhha hai! ☺☺☺

    Liked by 1 person

    • voiceofastranger · April 14, 2016

      Utna acha bhi nahi hai yaar jitna tum keharaheho first time try kiya hai..:) aur itna ache tareef ke liye shukriya..:)

      Liked by 1 person

      • Chandni Asnani · April 14, 2016

        Arey noo!! Sach me achha hai, aur likhoge toh maza ayega. Likhna okay? All the best! ☺☺☺☺

        Liked by 2 people

      • bhaatdal · April 14, 2016

        chandani you inspire so so many people very good keep it up .. 🙂 stay blessed 🙂

        Liked by 2 people

      • Chandni Asnani · April 14, 2016

        Thankyou Ma’am!! Hehe, maza ata haina! 😂
        Poetry is the door to a person’s soul, hehe, we come to know about their thoughts! ☺☺☺❤
        I’m loving this! Sabko poems likhna chaiye! 😇😇😇

        Liked by 2 people

      • bhaatdal · April 14, 2016

        Very true

        Liked by 2 people

      • voiceofastranger · April 14, 2016

        jii zarur..:)Shukriya..:)

        Liked by 1 person

  5. theycallmeaish · May 7, 2016

    Bohot khoob:p
    Indeed well written.
    A meaningful poem.

    Liked by 1 person

  6. SumitOfficial · May 8, 2016

    Wow.. It’s a wonderful start. 🙂

    (Chandu, well done. 😀)

    Liked by 1 person

  7. mywords331 · June 14, 2016

    Behad khoobsoorat..

    Like

Leave a Reply

Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google+ photo

You are commenting using your Google+ account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s