Broken soul..

Everyone wanted her to share her bed with them,but only he wanted her to share a part of her broken soul.

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26 comments

  1. Pratishtha · May 24, 2016

    Wow!
    Lovely.
    Anyone can share a bed but to share a broken soul,this is divine and rare nowadays.😊

    Liked by 2 people

  2. Poet Rummager · May 24, 2016

    The body can be given to a random stranger, but the soul; even a broken one, lingers where there’s love. Brief yet succinct — superb!

    Liked by 3 people

    • voiceofastranger · May 25, 2016

      Yeah it is..It’s hard for people this days to think beyond physical things ..thank you for stopping by..:)

      Liked by 1 person

  3. kratzworld · May 24, 2016

    Sharing a bed and sharing a soul, i guess the difference is unfathomable.

    Short nd touching 👍

    Liked by 3 people

  4. Chandni Asnani · May 24, 2016

    Aww, such a beautiful thought! Sharing a broken soul, that’s incomparable to anything else! ☺☺☺

    Liked by 2 people

  5. Nandita · May 24, 2016

    Oh My God!
    Everyone wanted to change her broken smile, no one tried to fix it

    Liked by 1 person

  6. Game Of Words · June 1, 2016

    Oh wow. It is lovely.

    Liked by 1 person

  7. bhaatdal · June 2, 2016

    Wow so, so caring ..

    Liked by 1 person

  8. Nishita13 · June 7, 2016

    I wrote this quote back then, “She was to be worshipped in the bedroom”, I realise the sequel to it is written here.
    You are an amazing writer. Glad to read your writings.
    Poets are true creatures, they spill their blood and emotions like normal people exhale carbon dioxide. Your writings justify your emotions in a simple and nice manner. Happy Blogging. 🙂
    Stay Beautiful. Keep Smiling. 🙂

    Liked by 1 person

    • voiceofastranger · June 7, 2016

      Thank you so very much..😍 You’re comment made my day for sure..:) Will surely go through posts later in the night,tbh i am searching for the perfect words to thank you for this amazing comment..:😊
      This poem is some token of respect for your comment

      See entered the blog
      with the aspiration of
      reading something good
      and somehow the writer
      was able deliver up to her
      Expectations and finally she
      left a comment that literally
      made his lips turn into
      grin that made his dark
      night into something star filled..:😊
      Happy blogging to you too..😊 Cheers..👍

      Liked by 1 person

      • Nishita13 · June 8, 2016

        Thankyou so much. I am so happy that I could add a smile on your face. That poem was well composed. Not only did your words painted to me another beautiful scene but they also were able to make me realise how there are two sides of a coin. Cheers to you. And happy June 🙂
        Happy 8th of June 2016. 🙂
        Happy blogging.

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